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December 09, 2008

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Will Peters

That's awesome! I love it. Just seen your post on entrepreneur.com and came over. You've got good stuff. Take a look a look at my site and let me know what you would do to improve. www.anstad.com. I'm focusing my marketing efforts on small businesses generating under $500k per year in the Charlotte Market to start. Your thoughts would be great.

Anonymous Ad Guy

Will,

Thanks for the kind words; glad I had something relevant to you.

Took a look at the site and a couple things jump out. First, I'd consider eliminating the flash intro. Most businesses are trending away from them these days. Most folks tend to hit the skip button anyway; they want to get to your site!

On the homepage, I'd think about simplifying the content to really focus on the customer benefit. Right now there's a lot about your company. I'd put more emphasis on your customer's needs, and save stuff like mission, about us, and careers for a secondary page. Ask yourself, if I've only got someone here for five seconds, what's the ONE thing I'd want them to take away from my site? Make sure that's the message that comes across first.

Anyone else have any thoughts? Check out his site and chime in.

Tom - StandOutBlogger.com

Focusing is something I need to focus on :P More in a way that I need to concentrate on one idea at a time...

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